[Madness]

The Long Held Breath

A Bakker short, mentioned to have been used in a creative writing class, but ultimately revealed as a portion of Light, Time, and Gravity.

[Aural]

So, this is a story about peeing? What's next? The black urine?

[Royce]

So, this is a story about peeing? What's next? The black urine?

The inverse anus is his next installment. Are you sure the message is about peeing?

[Madness]

I thought it was about being bullied?

[Aural]

The inverse anus is his next installment.

The sad thing is that I honestly wouldn't put it beyond him. In fact I wouldn't be surprised if the third series in TSA is actually the Inverse Anus.

[Garet Jax]

I thought it was more about being the bully and the ego it creates.

Good short though.

[SilentRoamer]

“Bease!” he cried through snot and cramp and fire. “Bease! Leave me alone!“

This is naked Bakker. It is such a powerful sentence; snot and cramp and fire are just so evocative, coupled with the distortion of speech this paints a fantasticly vivid scene for me. This could have come out of the mouth of any Inchie/Sranc/Cnaiur prisoner.